Take and take and take and

So this is where you’ve taken me
On the edge of your time, your space, your conditions
And I bend over to see what’s down there
But not too far, not too bent, not sure
About that hand of yours, resting on my back

That hand that has led me, brought me, hit me, loved me
Found places I thought were dead, did not exist
That hand that I still feel hot, burning, searing
When it’s gone to another one’s secrets
That hand that has never belonged to me

So this is where I stand
On the edge of my will, my reason, my desire
And as wide and open that my canyon is
As full and available I let it be
You will never bend over to see what’s down there

There is a taker
Does not necessarly mean
There is a giver

7 thoughts on “Take and take and take and”

  1. JELIEL³ says:

    such longing… beautiful

  2. Veronica says:

    Wow.

    It’s amazing, the effect some people can have.

    It is amazing, the depth you know.

  3. Weta says:

    Courageous, generous and very open. Keep up the good work.

  4. swan_pr says:

    veronica: yes, the effect can drive, the depth speaks.

    weta: thank you 🙂 and thank you for your visit, please come back any time.

  5. Chris says:

    This was powerful. I love how introspective it is. I feel like an idiot right now because words are failing me, when I want to say how great this entry was.

    Chris
    My Blog

  6. swan_pr says:

    chris: don’t. that you appreciate the words is enough said. thank you.

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